I really like the font and the sizes of the font used in all of the pages. The lighting in the phorography also looks appraopriate with it being slightly muted but enough to see the colouring. I think the negative to the front cover is to have the girl to the right a bit more appropriately stylised, or somebody who looks abit older as her young look may be only eye catching to people the same age, rather than any more maturer or older teens. The contents looks digital and robotic which is different and breaks conventions with the text not just following a certain line. I think the photography for the dps is really good especially with the text in the centre then the two models (musicians) to the sides which then draws you in to the text.
I really like the font and images used in all of your pages. They really go well with the theme and housestyle. The images instantly draw you in and looks appropriate for your magazine. The font sizes also go well in all of your pages, although in your DPS the font is very small and quite difficult to read :)
i like the housestyle of your magazine, it matches well. the photography is also good, i like the range of images and i like the eye catchiness of them. i also like the fonts.
I like the iroiny of the slogan to the actual death/vampire look. i aslo like the broken glass effect etc that is used on the contents. its a little hard to make out but its an effecive phot shop technique. The text on the dps is hard to make out. An AOI is in your dps. a little bit more text would be better. other than that perfect XD
House style is very good. The colour of text ion the front-cover really goes with the picture. Mast-head is really good.
ReplyDeleteYou cannot read the article on DPS due to font size and colour of text.
I like the way the images instantly draw you in. Also i like the way the contents page challenges convention.
ReplyDeleteAlthough i dont know because i cant see the article on the DPS i dont know hpw the main image and DPS goes with a music magazine.
From Deanne
I really like the font and the sizes of the font used in all of the pages. The lighting in the phorography also looks appraopriate with it being slightly muted but enough to see the colouring. I think the negative to the front cover is to have the girl to the right a bit more appropriately stylised, or somebody who looks abit older as her young look may be only eye catching to people the same age, rather than any more maturer or older teens. The contents looks digital and robotic which is different and breaks conventions with the text not just following a certain line. I think the photography for the dps is really good especially with the text in the centre then the two models (musicians) to the sides which then draws you in to the text.
ReplyDeleteI really like the font and images used in all of your pages. They really go well with the theme and housestyle. The images instantly draw you in and looks appropriate for your magazine. The font sizes also go well in all of your pages, although in your DPS the font is very small and quite difficult to read :)
ReplyDeletei like the housestyle of your magazine, it matches well. the photography is also good, i like the range of images and i like the eye catchiness of them. i also like the fonts.
ReplyDeleteI like the iroiny of the slogan to the actual death/vampire look. i aslo like the broken glass effect etc that is used on the contents. its a little hard to make out but its an effecive phot shop technique.
ReplyDeleteThe text on the dps is hard to make out.
An AOI is in your dps. a little bit more text would be better. other than that perfect XD